PoE Herald of Ice, League Starter, Melee builds

I'm hoping to gear this build fully by day 3-4 of league start, im just curious if i made any glaring errors or if people can suggest ways to increase the evasion, armor or life that would be great (will probably only be able to get +1 strike gloves but put in +2 strike), cant really think of any other gear ive put in that is unreachable within the first few days. i dont mind doing less damage if the trade off is more survivability. I went with Scion because im planning on playing a scion build later on in the league so this is my attempt to level and play with one char before respeccing into

1m full dps with replica abyssus or 800k with fractal thoughts Lethal pride is going to be got probably in yellow maps has chance to intimidate on herbalism, annoint is probably going to change to tribal fury however I tested in std and it feels ok in yellow maps without it. Chest upgrade would definitely be +1 curse chest 6l either cospri or rare hunter chest. Build will have issues bossing, but will feel good in low tier/mid tier maps Nightmare jewel is normally cheap for power charge generation. If I can't pu

Currently level 90. Current pob dps is about 500k. Still trying to farm atziri's step and pandemonius. Pandemonius is probably the hardest to obtain. But this was a cheap league starter, well rolled white wind was 4c and 6l i got off harvest craft. Here's the tree and gear i'm kind of aiming for, but have to wait for cluster crafting to get buffed next week.

Pretty straight forward concept here. Debeon's Dirge with an instant enduring cry for the +150% elemental damage. With such a high base of flat cold damage, the best way to scale this build is with a ton of More multipliers, attack speed, cold penetration, and abyss jewels. Chose Raider for the attack speed/movespeed to make ground slam "feel good" since its an older skill and because it came together on the skill tree better than Champion, Berserker, or cold to fire Chieftain. Scion with raider + slayer or champ is a close second however. With buffs up my build has just under 1.3mil shaper d