PoE Onslaught, Trap builds

Heya, so I wanna league start ele helix but I would like to play raider instead of deadeye, since you can easily get fledgling at league start which is the whole point of deadeye and raider is zoomier on top. Can you review the PoB and share you thoughts ? Btw the build yoinked and changed a bit to fit raider. PoB:

This is a build I'm planning to league start. It probably does and will suck. But I'd be happy for feedback on it anyway. Maybe there are other players like me who don't assume that all these fancy things people put on builds are attainable and want a no-budget ssf build, or this build may just be useful input to someone somehow. It's got 100% spell supp, 13k max phys hit, 90% evasion, and 110k dps. This is without shock, onslaught or power charges (though I am doing shock, onslaught and assassins mark on hit). It uses smoke

new mark changes are op: - gives power charge gen automation with quality ass mark, - permanent marks, and - boss and map frenzy generation - automates mark mitigation WHY IS THE UNRESERVED MANA NEGATIVE 28? - pathofmatth: use focus amulet, free blessing aura from march of the legion style Claw Bases: (22) Any until Blinder (26) Avoid Timeworn (30) Sparkling Claw (36) Double Claw - Mana gained on Hit OP (57) Twin Claw - MGoH (72) Gemini Claw - MgoH Act1 - Galvanic - Onslaught - Mirage Archer Gems at 4 - War Banner -

I know I know, yet another seis trap/exsanguinate build. But, I haven't seen any ascendants using this! This build uses aegis aurora, iron reflexes (60k armour), 100% spell suppression, molten shell on lmb and life gain on trap trigger along with mini-pf 4% life gained per flask use (should be approx 20% life regained every 2-3 hits) for defences. From my experience with PFPC this league with lower armour, I found that AA alone was ridiculous for sustain. Ignite immunity from flask, shock immunity from tempest shield, and pantheon freeze immunity and poison/chill mitigation. Enduring compo