PoE Impale, Bow builds

Again with all my off-meta builds for now, I am prefacing this by stating my builds are extreme low budget and low time investment. I am old and no longer able to no-life PoE anymore. Me and a buddy (who is new at PoE) wanted to play a Duo-syncing build and he also is daunted by the skill tree, so he wanted me to create both of our builds. Which is what I did. He only gave me a few requirements and I tried to hit them: Good visual clarity. We did a duo flameblast build last season and he said he couldn't see shit. Bow build. He wanted the character to be a bow build, simply. B

Had an idea for a tornado shot impale champion that uses steelworm alongside perseverance to scale defences. Getting damage on the build is the tricky part, has anybody played any impale builds and have some ideas on how this can be improved?

So because of multiple games that game out in this time, I didnt get to play this league much. Since 3.18 isnt making many changes I was thinking of trying out my build again but was wondering if maybe there was any advice people could give. This was a build of my own design so I know its not great, but any tips would be appreciated. I super lack in defenses and my gem links are just stuff I threw together. Like I still have a portal gem and GMP i was leveling in there. The Vaal Summon Skeletons is literally just used as a blocker/distraction for big scary things or bad groups. As for the

Originally I started this build on a berserker simply due to berserk. Once I found out about rotblood + chains of emancipation I swapped to deadeye and its been feeling better. Currently the build clears very well with 350% movespeed and has pretty high single target burst. Defenses are passable against hits (from what I understand, I have 5k hps against hits as long as I'm leeching) but degens are what kill the build often. I'm looking for suggestions to push the build farther. Currently my biggest problem is trying to go back to point blank + pride range wit