PoE builds similar to PoE - Flicker AFK - Test Build (T6 Pit - 2 Extra + Shock)

First time building a build from absolute scratch, need some help reviewing some of my choices (tree nodes, uniques, etc) Don't pay attention to resist, most items have mid-low tier rolls. Take into account only accuracy, damage, crit chance and so on. Any advice is really appreciated!

Focus - (potentially Phase Run if the trigger immediately removes it) - Vaal Flicker Strike Make sure you're low enough on chaos res that forbidden rite deals 51% of life damage.

With evasion "standart" armor she gets up to %70 phy reduction. %24 physical overwhelm, %25 impale overwhelm. %220~~ increased life, for my hardcore needs. Get your resists from the gear, Use evasion bases for maxiumum phy reduction. Use arctic armor instead of Flesh if you want to take "Less" phy damage. Good movement speed for clear. Can equip Great Old One's Tentacles to replace melee splash with brutality, change melee splash passives to melee strike range IF you use them. Tree is close to some jewel sockets, you can get them by sacrificing Scion max hp points, considering you get 7% from

Really want to start a Flicker build, and wanted to try out the cold version but not sure if its viable as a starter what you think? pob:

PoB: So the idea is to go Trickster to make flicker free, and then to go MoM to take advantage of that defensively. I am doing this rather than Terminus Est Crit Flicker because I'm a hipster I guess? I've started every league since Breach with Oro's flicker, and I know it is quite solid for everything up to and including yellow maps, which is all I really need for a league starter anyway. Any suggestions for improving the build? Don't pay too much attention to the gear, I was mostly just playing around with the new "sort by dps"