PoE builds similar to 🌀 FLICKER STRIKE 3.7

First time building a build from absolute scratch, need some help reviewing some of my choices (tree nodes, uniques, etc) Don't pay attention to resist, most items have mid-low tier rolls. Take into account only accuracy, damage, crit chance and so on. Any advice is really appreciated!

So after a bit of messing around, I might have come up with a phys Flicker Strike Slayer that looks like it's SSF viable for a league start. Parameters: 900k+ boss DPS assuming maximum Rage, Pride effect and totems, but no Berserk or Vaal Haste (goes up to 1.5m burst DPS if so). Not that you'd be doing pinnacles on this, but it's a good indication of single target potential. Clear DPS drops to 533k without totems, Vaal Haste, Berserk, or Intimidate, and setting Pride to minimum effect, but is helped along by Tribal Fury's new mel

PoB: So the idea is to go Trickster to make flicker free, and then to go MoM to take advantage of that defensively. I am doing this rather than Terminus Est Crit Flicker because I'm a hipster I guess? I've started every league since Breach with Oro's flicker, and I know it is quite solid for everything up to and including yellow maps, which is all I really need for a league starter anyway. Any suggestions for improving the build? Don't pay too much attention to the gear, I was mostly just playing around with the new "sort by dps"

Howdy all! Absolutely new to PoE, got a point in game where running T16's is doable, but fairly hard and not consistent, I die roughly every other map (sometimes a lot more). From the guide I was using I look almost "done" but I've certainly got a lot of improvement to go. I have about 4-5 div available, could anyone make some recommendations on what I can strive for next? My build: Guide I was following: [