PoE builds similar to Frenzy Trauma Poison Slayer - Mapping Showcase

Hi, guys, I came up with an idea for a buid last league using new unique bow The Gluttunous Tide and I'm looking for options to improve the build without mirror tier items, maybe you could have some ideas. The idea is to make every 1st attack gain max frenzy charges and every 2nd attack to lose all of them to proc additional projectiles from the bow so build does not need to use GMP/Volley. I decided to go with LL Petrified blood setup to get more auras and I got pretty sweep ehp in PoB. I am thinking on how to improve build further but I didn't test in in the game yet. Main links - I was

Gearing notes: - Tincture: Lightning Pen and Melee Strike range. They're not terribly expensive, and my perfect rolled on cost me 1 div. I like to prioritize the range over the pen, because I like hitting monsters from the other side of rivers. Might be able strike range out for splash, or rage on hit, and get more damage, but then you'd probably be running different tinctures for different content, and I just want to be lazy. - Helm: Anything ES here. Crown of Thorns is a nice starter. Get resistance, get something better than what I have. - Weapon

Hey, I was thinking about going Exsanguinate Elemancer spellslinger as my started since the DoT numbers seem pretty nice, worst case scenario I'll switch to BA ignite. This is the passive tree that I came up with so far: I'm trying to get some spell damage in the witch area and then get the both phys dot nodes, life, and some wand stuff. I would be grateful if someone could look over it and maybe point out any stupid mistakes.

First time making a build but really just stealing the tree and some gear thoughts from a TS build I was following and combined them into VD/DD. Wanted to get some thoughts on it to see where I could improve or if there are some useless things I'm doing to change POB:

First of all, this is my first build posting so be nice with me. This is as much to get feedback on the build construction but I believe it to be very interesting. Frenzy as main skill to stack and facilitate frenzy charge generation (I don t like on kill generation) 19.8m Shaper DPS - NOT ACCOUNTING FOR THE NEW KEYSTONE PRECICE TECHNIQUE which is 40% more - High chance that the keystone ends up along the path taken 5K Life - 1.8k life leech 78% evade 90% phys reduction 100% spell suppression 22% block chance 9 Frenzy charges / 4 endurance charges (enduring composure trigger) Freeze