PoE Mjolner, Fire builds without The Ivory Tower

POB: Introduction After playing this build twice during Delirium league as both Chieftain and Raider, I wanted to try a new version using the tech the community has learned over the past years and introducing some new flavor with the tools added to the game recently. This build features higher DPS than the staple Raider variant and a more tanky experience even as a melee character. Why Dissolution of the Flesh? This powerful but misunderstood jewel was introduced in Siege of the Atlas and its used in this build to enable some great interactions and

I found one on my first char and wanted to see if I could do something for the event, but I'm terrible at creating builds. I went away from Templar because I don't think crit is particularly easy to gear, so I wanted to try Chieftain with CwC fire conversion (PF trigger, WoC in weapon). DPS on this is like 400k and defenses are nearly non-existent. I could go glancing but would need a life on block shield I think. Any thoughts (including "this is terrible please stop") is appreciated.