PoE builds similar to 3.16 Scourge One Long Sip

Like the title says I want to try some new things this league so I put together a quick inexpensive POB for my plans. I'm sure the tree could be optimized, I'm open to suggestions.

Howdy all! Absolutely new to PoE, got a point in game where running T16's is doable, but fairly hard and not consistent, I die roughly every other map (sometimes a lot more). From the guide I was using I look almost "done" but I've certainly got a lot of improvement to go. I have about 4-5 div available, could anyone make some recommendations on what I can strive for next? My build: Guide I was following: [

setup with new gem info and tattoos but without new unique info trauma has alt qual giving aps per trauma fire res and frenzy charge max tattoos, went with 3 max fire res ones on str travel nodes and 1 big dex node for the frenzy, max cold res is useless as we are valako and are scaling that way flicker is viable as we no longer dont care much about aps other than easy places, (gloves , weapon, and frenzy charges) we dont need ashes to scale aps through qual like bs so we go auls for malevolence uprising so that we can have u

So after a bit of messing around, I might have come up with a phys Flicker Strike Slayer that looks like it's SSF viable for a league start. Parameters: 900k+ boss DPS assuming maximum Rage, Pride effect and totems, but no Berserk or Vaal Haste (goes up to 1.5m burst DPS if so). Not that you'd be doing pinnacles on this, but it's a good indication of single target potential. Clear DPS drops to 533k without totems, Vaal Haste, Berserk, or Intimidate, and setting Pride to minimum effect, but is helped along by Tribal Fury's new mel