PoE Berserker, Marauder, Bow builds

I made this build, it's interesting and sort of works by leveraging big health pool via dissolution of the flesh to scale Bloodthirst support for lots of flat added phys converted using Doomfletch. Rite of Ruin downside is completely offset by endless Eternal Youth like the rage vortex build featured here last week (an inspiration). It mostly works, it's insanely fast and blows up packs, but having trouble scaling brittle and scorched on bosses to get great damage numbers. &x200B; Obviously Rain of Arrows does not scale well except on large bosses that get hit a lot, but you can get a

So i was fucking around with bloodthirst support seemed interesting and also did read on some old reddit post it is quite good with doomprism or voidforge. And since i sometimes try to atleast get to the point where i can make my own build without copy pasta 90% from poeninja, id like them 5heads that know more about it to rate,roast or give me some pointers on whats missing or is only viable on pob or just is stupid to beginn with. the gear isnt supposed to be that high tier, altho iam not exactly a good crafter so not really aware how much some of the slots would cost to get them to t

Could toxic rain work with berserker ? Look at the PoB number, it's not that bad .. can someone tell me if I make a mistake somewhere ? My PoB :

Here's the PoB: &x200B; As for why I chose zerker, the ascendancy offers 68% AS, 20% MS, 40% more damage, and instant 25% HP heals every \~1.8 seconds. The 10% HP degen can most likely be countered by regen from the tree, Enduring Cry (with 3 second duration), and Thief's Torment + Quill Rain + hella AS (\~6.8 AS + Mirage Archer). Temporal Chains and Toxic Rain's slow helps with defense as well. Overall, Berserker offers some nice utility, and tons of damage and AS, and a pretty decent spot on the tree. &x200B; As fo