PoE 3.23 Affliction Arcane builds

Please rip this build to shreds and tell me this is shit but below is a PoB I threw together for an Ice Nova build using new Archmage in a 5link Pledge of Hands. Gear is very, very basic and it seems fairly squish as a result but unless I'm missing something it seems like it should be pretty fun to lightning warp around, hitting ice nova and auto casting frost bolts and echoing more ice nova's for pretty good early mapping with minimal investment. Appreciate y'alls feedback

Back at work again today, can't play. Over the weekend I spent a good portion of my money upgrading my manabond character from the previous post. Got mageblood, 3rat talisman, rare boots and some other upgrades. Went from 12k es to 16k es, 8m to 18m dps. Not shabby but not where I want to be just yet. I still haven't purchased the forbidden jewels or squire. That's definitely the next step for me. My plans for the future include getting a gg ring, the kalandra's mirror ring, the squire, and the forbidden jewels, which all but taps out my budget, about 360 div