PoE 3.23 Affliction Kitava's Thirst, Lightning builds

Please rip this build to shreds and tell me this is shit but below is a PoB I threw together for an Ice Nova build using new Archmage in a 5link Pledge of Hands. Gear is very, very basic and it seems fairly squish as a result but unless I'm missing something it seems like it should be pretty fun to lightning warp around, hitting ice nova and auto casting frost bolts and echoing more ice nova's for pretty good early mapping with minimal investment. Appreciate y'alls feedback

Dumped a ton of end of the league currency into this one and was very underwhelmed by the results. Idea was supposed to be similar to except on a Berserker, using the added physical damage when crit and access to attack speed. It is terrible for the investment, can't even clear T16. Neither the damage nor the tan