PoE League Starter, Melee builds without Boneshatter, Guardian, Hierophant, Inquisitor

Pretty straight forward concept here. Debeon's Dirge with an instant enduring cry for the +150% elemental damage. With such a high base of flat cold damage, the best way to scale this build is with a ton of More multipliers, attack speed, cold penetration, and abyss jewels. Chose Raider for the attack speed/movespeed to make ground slam "feel good" since its an older skill and because it came together on the skill tree better than Champion, Berserker, or cold to fire Chieftain. Scion with raider + slayer or champ is a close second however. With buffs up my build has just under 1.3mil shaper d

PoB: So the idea is to go Trickster to make flicker free, and then to go MoM to take advantage of that defensively. I am doing this rather than Terminus Est Crit Flicker because I'm a hipster I guess? I've started every league since Breach with Oro's flicker, and I know it is quite solid for everything up to and including yellow maps, which is all I really need for a league starter anyway. Any suggestions for improving the build? Don't pay too much attention to the gear, I was mostly just playing around with the new "sort by dps"